New 3-chapter pilot: feedback wanted on The Highlights Left by a Dead Reader

Today Plotloom is opening a new 3-chapter pilot: The Highlights Left by a Dead Reader.

It follows a night archivist who files the highlights of dead readers and finds annotations inside a book that has not been published yet. Useful feedback can be very small:

1. Does the chapter 1 hook make you open chapter 2?
2. Does the highlight/archive premise feel expandable?
3. After chapter 3, would this work better as a longer serial or a closed short?

A one-line signal is enough for this beta.