horror story first line examples
Horror Story First Line Examples
Five compact first-line patterns for opening a horror story without exposition.
Prompt opener
The camera saw me blink. I was not in the room. The replay was live.
Draft a first line that names the evidence before it names the monster.
Why it works
- - The first line creates proof instead of lore.
- - The second line contradicts the proof.
- - The third line makes the contradiction urgent.
Rewrite moves
- - Start with a record: camera, voicemail, receipt, log, or timestamp.
- - Contradict the record in line two.
- - Delay the explanation until after the reader has a question.
Test your version
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